Wednesday, December 7, 2016
The Room
I looked around, the walls, they were moving. I stood still, watching the walls shift slowly. The walls changed shape. Then they stopped. The room was much smaller now. I saw Cassie on the floor and I went to her. “As I turned around it changed shape!” screamed Cassie. “I know, I know,” I replied. I pulled Cassie up and hugged her. “I do not want to go through it again!” wailed Cassie. “We do not have a choice,” I said. As those words were spoken, the door opened and in stepped a woman. “Time for your new life,” said the woman.
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This is a really great story! The only thing I could find was when Cassie screamed, “As I turned around it changed shape,” the comma should be replaced by an exclamation point, since she's screaming.
ReplyDeleteamazing story but every time you change the speaker you have to make a new paragraph.
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