The Tunnel
The water was splashing against my ankles. The smell was almost unbearable. I continued
to run. I spotted in the distance, that
there was light. My hopes suddenly
raised. I stopped and glanced
upward. It was another sewer cover. I climbed the ladder, hoping I was finally
safe. I grabbed onto the cover, but
found myself slipping back toward the murky water. I looked back up at the cover. Slime
dripped through the cover, landing with a splash in the water. Suddenly, I heard a voice from the other end
of the tunnel. It was the police.
Maybe combine these two sentences together, The smell was almost unbearable. I continued to run. With the word 'but'. Maybe re-word this sentence, I spotted in the distance, that there was light. To read, I spotted something in the distance, a light.
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